My fingers slink off like baby slugs. My nails are left, clamped like bark to a birch in a dying March winter. The air is wine.
My feet are hollow, stubby chins, my eyes dangle off like earrings, without sparkle or diamond for redemption: my lips are swollen, thrown-up pieces of lung strewn over my face. I breathe outside myself.
Your hair is pretty.
my toes are
my thummbbbbb
my
I think you are the only warrior, the only poet, the only murderer I know who smells like that.
our legs are wrapped in sheets like wounded and sore babies out of a womb that
our legarms
our
i have folds of skin in my palms, in the soles of my, in my, my me, i love
Let's have some babies.
how the hell do you write like that?
Being fourteen and all...I'm fourteen too...and I've never met anyone who can write like that.
Are you insane? Cuz geniusus have to be insane, you know.
Ah well. I'm slowly going through your gallery x]
thank you so much, as well!
Love it, keep working =]
Favourite line: The air is wine.
I love how you make everything real. The words jump off the screen. Everything has a colour or smell or something. I love it all.
Overrall...it leaves me confused and contemplative. I suppose there are many poems that do that...
thank you! ..i think!
the piece. oozes it, subtly then pours it out in decadent reams.
very good, the portion at the top, the syntax and movement really captures attention well
thought provoking and manipulative.
excellent job.